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Old 03-21-2006, 07:13 AM   #9
PBodyGT87
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Originally Posted by SmokingSS
...now im positive...there is something severly wrong with central jersey people... haha

btw, liz, are you by any chance persuing a creative writing career? You're stories make for some good reading. lol
Thanks! I actually thought about going into creative writing, and sometimes I think I should have done that, instead of doing music, or maybe just do both? Anyhow, I have taken creative writing courses before and I do enjoy writing. While this is definitely not my best little piece of work, hehe, the concept for writing a good story is really simple. Never start a sentence with the same word more than once, and never use the word "it", use it only once in a story if you have to. It calls for more descriptive words thus making the story more detailed and entertaining. This is also a great method to use when writing papers, cuz it gets me an A every time. I don't think I followed most of those rules in this story but, it was close.
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