[bubba428]

LOL well the riffs sound all, like girly...but then outta nowhere you got some heavy ass distortion...its like an aborted fetus, the chance was there, but its scattered.

but seriously tell your drummer to lay of the symbols and rely more on the toms. the guitar riffs are interesting. good general idea on the music but there it too much effects muddling the actual guitar playing, and lay off the 3 chord harmonic riffs. SCREAMS punk...punk sucks. you need to get you bass player to add in some transitions between the length of time he stays at one note. I heard on song F a mini bass solo. he needs to do that ALL the time. song B has good structure, decent progression, yet your drummer is still gay for symbols. the solo doesn't quite fit. you've got 2 different vibes going on. the solo sounds like a hippy jam fest but the song is more of something you'd want no guitar solo or have a singer singing what the guitar is playing.